学会十句高中英语写作方法,10分钟内拿满分!
【来源:易教网 更新时间:2017-10-14】 十句英语作文法是由高考专家总结出来的一种高分英语作文方法,你在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此易教网家教中心老师向大家加以介绍,目的是使对英语作文没有把握的你找到一条可行的解决办法。需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句,从很多考生的高分来分析,句子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如果以每个句子平均10—15个单词计算,便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求100—120字的作文。
十句英语作文基本模式
【模式解析】
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,必须提出,通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相关和一致;第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理,结构得当。
三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。
【优秀例文】
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主题句)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(扩展句)
Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3)(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(扩展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(扩展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.
(8)(扩展句) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(扩展句)
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV programs being produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(总结句)
【专家点评】
1.本文是一篇典型的十句作文,主题句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us”点明了文章的主题,其他句子均围绕它进行扩展。扩展句(句2—9)内容详实,结束句(句10)总结性和概括性很强。整篇文章层次清晰,充分体现了十句作文法的特点。
2.较好地使用了大量的连接词,如for one thing, for another, besides, furthermore, and also等,另外,in short的使用也使结论更加清晰,概括更加明了。
3.最后的总结句富有创意,利用分词短语的形式把上下文连贯起来,体现了作者对英语句式的灵活应用,避免了一般性的概括语,很有特点。
4.使用了较高级的词汇句型,不单调,像宾语从句(what is happening halfway across the world,our life will become more significant),定语从句(who can not go to formal university),分词短语(by watching…,for making fruit cakes, having viewed these aspects),重点短语(plays an important educational role, provide…for…),高级单词(present, broaden, scope)和with复合结构(with many more TV programs produced)等,这些都极大地提升了文章的档次。
十句 高中英语写作方法与步骤
1.审题确定格式、体裁、时态、人称等写作要点。
2.列出提纲,确定开头句、扩展句和总结句,选择好适宜的句型。
3. 利用一些关联词或者过渡句把句子有机地连接起来,必要时可适当增加细节。
4. 仔细检查,适当修改,保证句子结构完整,要点齐全,人称时态主谓一致。
5.认真誊写,卷面整洁。
结束语